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task 2 sample essay from Abdullah with comments from Sir Alam

sample essay
Question:
Some people think that only government can make significant changes in society,
while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence, what is your opinion?
Answer :
Every person dreams to live in a happy and peaceful society. However, it is a debatable
topic whether individuals or government can have more impact in making a society better
place to live. It is believed that government is in much better position to fulfil this
role. This essay will examine this by analyzing how government can make and impose new
rules as well as create awareness among people for developing a better society.
Each and every person has to follow some rules and regulations in order to maintain a
disciplined society. Government is an authority who can make new rules, and make sure
that people can follow these roles. As an example, people of different cultures and
religions are living in Dubai, government have made such rules and regulations which
each and everyone has to follow regardless of there culture and religion, in order
to maintain a peaceful society. This shows government has major role in developing
and maintaining a peaceful society.
Awareness among people also plays a vital role in maintaining and developing a peaceful
society. Government has got the funds and best resources, in order to raise awareness
among people regarding the importance of peaceful and healthy society. In London,
government run different awareness programs on different television channels and on the
radio. These programs helps in raising awareness among people regarding following rules
and regulations government has imposed for the betterment of society. This shows that
these programs are only possible by the help of government, as the require huge budget.
In conclusion,government has got more resources, so it should use these resources in
order to develop and maintain healthy and peaceful society.
Abdullah, Karachi

9 Responses so far.

  1. Alam Alam says:

    Question :
    These days people are living into their 90s and beyond. As a result, there is increasing concern about care of the elderly.

    Do you think it is the responsibility of the family to care for their elderly members or should the
    government be held responsible?

    Sample Answer :

    Nowadays, medical science has made lots of progress in last two decades. As a result, average age of people has increased. However, this increase in average age of people has started a new debate. According to some people it is the responsibility of the government to look after these aged people. While, others think that their family is responsible for taking care of these old people. It is believed that, government is responsible for taking care of all the old people. This essay will examine that how this is the responsibility of the government to fulfill the needs of old aged people.

    Old aged people have paid taxes to the government during their young age. When these people were young and healthy, they gave some amount of money from their salary every month to the government in terms of medical services. For example, my uncle has been living in London from last forty years. During this period he has visited the doctor only three times, cause he has kept a healthy routine during that period.
    Now as he become older, it is the responsibility of the government to take care all of his expenses. This shows that it is the responsibility of the government to take steps to make life easy for the old age people
    by taking care of their issues.

    In most developed countries of the world, governments has introduced lots of taxes on working class. As a result, it has become much difficult for a person to fulfil the needs of his immediate family as well as his elderly family members at the same time. As an example, my father has six members in his immediate family, this means he has to look after all the needs of his immediate family members. As he has a limited salary, after paying all the taxes it becomes very difficult for him to manage all the issues related to his elderly family members. This is quite obvious, that it is difficult for a salaried person to look after the needs of his immediate family as well as their old age family members.

    In conclusion, It is clear from the above mentioned discussion that government has to take the responsibility
    of older aged people.

    Abdullah,
    IELTS student Karachi

  2. abdullah says:

    it is thought by some that a school teachers role is to motivate and inspire students. However, other people believe that a teachers primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is the role of a teacher?

    Teachers have a vital role in upbringing of all children. But some people argue that their role has to be limited to transfer the knowledge they possess. While in other’s people opinion their main role is to encourage students to boost their self confidence. I believe that major role of teachers is to make a student mentally strong, so they can easily pursue their goals. This essay will examine how this role of teachers has higher precedence then just transferring the knowledge.

    Many students lack inspiration during their early education life. These students do not have any knowledge about what to do in their life. For example, during my early years of education,I do not like mathematics as a subject, but when I was in the fourth grade, a new mathematics teacher joined our school. She explained us the importance and application of mathematics in different areas of our lives. This extra knowledge inspired me to take keen interest in this subject, and choose this subject for specialization in graduation.This shows that how a teacher inspired a student from converting his weakness into a strength.

    Confidence is a key factor to be successful in life. Students who have self confidence can easily prospere in their life. Teachers play a vital role in increasing this self confidence among their students, so these students work hard with high motivation towards their goal. When a teacher works hard with his students, this shows that he has believe in them. This believe and motivation naturally get transferred to the students and help them to become successful in their life.

    In conclusion, confidence and inspiration are very important for students to achieve their goals. It is suggested that teachers should teach in a way students get inspired, motivated and feel confident.

  3. abdullah says:

    Some people think that employees should ensure a supportive and pleasant work environment where each employee is respected and valued equally while others think employers should focus instead on providing better facilities and equipment?

    What is your opinion?

    Response:

    Nowadays, normally an employee spent eight or more hours in his office on weekdays. Many people think that it is more important to have a healthy, supportive and non political environment, so they can enjoy spending this time at the work location. Other people argue that if they have more facilities at the office location, it has more positive impact for the employees. In my opinion, healthy, supportive, and friendly environment where each employee has equal chance to succeed is more important for an employee. This essay will examine this by analyzing how such an environment makes an employee to work much harder as well as keeps the loyalty of the employee with the employer.

    Firstly, a non biased and friendly environment at an office keeps an employee motivated. The employee gives his
    maximum, as he knows that there is only one chance to get successful, and he can achieve this by working hard.
    For example, Sakonent is an IT consulting company in Chicago, the revenues of this company are in millions of dollars. This company started in early twenty first century, this company has provided a healthy and non biased environment for its employees, and in response the employees worked much harder to achieve this success. This shows how the better environment helps the employees to work hard for his employer.

    Secondly, In order to make a employer successful, it is important to keep his old employees intact. Employees stick
    to a company, if they enjoy working there. A friendly environment at a workplace is a key contributor in maintaining the employees with the employer. As an example, in most of the Software companies, the employee turnover is much high. Most of the people leave there companies because the environment was not friendly, and they are working under much stress. So employees like to work on long term basis with those companies which provide them stress free environment. This shows that stress free environment help in maintaining workers in a company.

    In conclusion, I agree that it is more important to maintain an environment in which employee feels fresh, motivated and stress free to work than providing them with better facilities and equipment. So it is suggested that employer try to create such an environment for his employees.

  4. abdullah says:

    A poor infrastructure hinders under developed countries from progress and
    modernising. Some people think that this should be the first problem
    tackled by foreign aid.

    To what extent do you agree with this statement?

    Nowadays, it is the dream of every third world country to make progress, so
    their nationals can enjoy their life. However, unavailability of proper infrastructure
    is a major hurdle in achievement of this goal. It is claimed by some people that
    most of the foreign aid should be spent for development of proper infrastructure.
    It is agreed that governments of under developed countries should try to built
    proper infrastructure with the help of developed nations. This essay will examine the importance
    of proper infrastructure in order to make a country progressive as well as provide its
    people to spend a modern life.

    Firstly, a country has more chances to make progress, if it has a proper system. If a
    country has a proper communication system, this will help in developing different
    employment opportunities for its nationals. For example, in last fifteen years, internet
    has revolutionized the whole world, many under developed countries has spent major
    amount of their aid for betterment of this system. As a result, most of world
    renowned companies has their call centres in under developed countries, lots of
    job opportunities are produced, and this helped in making a more progressive nation.

    Secondly, proper infrastructure is also important for enjoying a modern life. Nowadays,
    most of the people are working much harder, and for long hours to enjoy all the luxuries
    of a modern life. In this life, people enjoy mostly by visiting to a shopping mall. They
    watch any movie, and then enjoy dinner with their family. All these things are impossible without
    presence of a good infrastructure and planning. Most of the under developed countries are
    trying to develop such an environment, so their people can enjoy their life.

    In conclusion, It is agreed that a strong and proper infrastructure plays a major
    role in development of country and its people, so under developed countries should keep this
    issue at top priority, and try to resolve this with help of other countries.

  5. abdullah says:

    An increasing number of people are now using the internet to
    meet people and socialise. Some people think this has brought
    people closer together with others, while others think people
    are becoming more isolated.

    Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

    From last decade, internet has revolutionised the world communication.
    However, some people claim that as most people are using internet
    to interact with each other, this has made them more closer, while
    other argue that people become more isolated by the use of internet.
    This essay will examine both sides of the view.

    on one side of the argument, there are people who argue that use of internet
    has made people more closer. Nowadays, internet is activated on nearly every
    mobile phone. By using these phones, people are always in touch with number of
    other people through Facebook, skype, twitter and other social media sites. They
    are also connected to their friends and relatives in other cities and countries.
    As an example, my uncle has been working in merchant navy from last fifteen years,
    during the early period of their job, he calls only two to three times within six
    months, as it was very expensive to communicate. But from the time, he bought an internet
    enabled phone, it became very easy for him to communicate with his family.
    This made it clear that use of internet has brought a positive change in life of
    people by keeping them connected with lots of other people across the globe.

    On the contrary, some people also make a counter argument that people become
    isolated by using internet. They only socialize and communicate to only a limited
    number of people. For example, through internet many teenagers spent most of their
    time in chatting with their friends. They are unable to spent time with their family,
    which they used to do before using internet. In this way, people also become isolated
    by using internet. This shows that socialising through internet has some negative impact
    on its users.

    In conclusion, the above essay has examined both the positive and negative sides
    of communication through internet. In my opinion, It is agreed that by socialising
    through internet has more positive impacts, as people are continuously connected
    with their friends and relatives.

  6. abdullah says:

    Is diet necessary for health or physical activities?
    What’s your opinion about it?

    In order to enjoy life, it is important to have good health, and people take different measures
    to achieve this. However, some people claim that taking balanced diet is more important
    in order to keep healthy, while others argue that physical activities have more positive
    impact on health. It is agreed that physical activity is more important for keeping a person healthy. This essay will examine this by analyzing how physical exercise helps in removing harmful
    substances from body as well as keep different systems within the body maintained.

    Firstly, In human body there are different harmful substances whose excess will be dangerous for
    health. Fats are one of those substances. It is very important to keep fats to a desired
    lower level in the body. Most of the doctors all over the world suggest to do some sort of
    physical exercise to maintain body fats to a certain level. For example, it is suggested to
    make running an integral part of our daily routine. By doing this our body fats will be maintained
    to the desired level.

    Secondly, different systems are working in our body, in order to keep a person healthy, its
    important to have all those systems working perfectly. As an example, my uncle has been living
    in London from last forty years. Its part of his daily routine to take a walk for an hour after
    the dinner. He has visited the doctor just two times during this long period. This shows that any
    sort of physical activity is very important to keep a person healthy.

    In conclusion, it is believed that physical exercise is very important in order to spend a
    healthy life. So it is recommended that everyone should make physical exercise as part of their
    daily routine.

  7. Some people think that only government can make significant changes in society,
    while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence, what is your opinion?

    Alterations in the society can be brought by government and sometimes by individuals too, think people. However, it is true that society is made by every single person but controlled by government. Although individuals can make changes but the ideas and will of every person differ; therefore government not only has to spread the awareness among people but it also has to impose new laws, which everyone has to follow or is compelled to follow, in order to make society an excellent place to inhabit.

    Some people like to invest their own belongings to make their society better while some are reluctant just because they think the government should fulfill their needs particularly the basic ones. For instance, two persons living in a same street: one throws the garbage in the dustbin which he himself has planted outside his home. Other throws his garbage on the road of the same street and thinks that any government servant will come and clean the street. So, by these two opposite actions the society cannot be cleaned because the hard work of one person will go in vein just because of the action on another person.

    Government has the power to make people aware of things which harm and which are beneficial for the society. For example, government should spread the awareness through things like media and home to home surveys. This will reduce the negatives in society and increase the positives.

    In addition to the government’s range of authority, government can introduce new laws and can bound people to follow them. Like, if one’s idea or will of benefiting society does not match another’s idea then it does not matter because government wants them to follow what it wants them to follow. By doing this, opposition of one another will vanish.

    To conclude, despite individuals’ clash in changing society, the government can make them do the same work which would be constructive for the sovereignty. I believe if citizens abide the laws which are promulgated my government then the society will be as clean as a whistle.

    written By: “M.H.KHAN.”
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