My student’s essay and comments for improvement
Below is a sample essay from one of my online IELTS student in Khobar, KSA. Please find comments where you lacks and suggestion how she can improve. Going through this sample essay and comments not only help you see what are general mistakes but also correct you if you make similar mistakes. Such practice helps many practice specially those who wish to get 7 or above band score in writing module.
The main reason for this is that they write but there is not body to check it and let them know where the lack and what they need to pick.
Student’s response and comments from Sir Alam