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KSA June 2016 ielts essays

Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits.

Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

 

Sample Answer:

A well known sportsman getting advantages in his daily life from his fame and also sometimes they have to face disadvantages as well. If we focus on the merits of being a famous sportsman then it could be like, they will be familiar to everywhere specially at their hometown, they will be getting respects from their fans but in the meanwhile they have to face de-merits as well like their social life and family life effect.

A famous sportsman enjoyS life which he may he imagine in his dreams. He/she will be recognized all over. If he/shethey travel or shopping at public places then people knows him very well. They will called at TV programs, they will be interviewed at different media centers. People around the country and around the world knows him, they give him lot of respects as well. As famous sportsman goes in a shopping mall then people gives him respects, taking autographs, taking selfies and they can get special discounts as well from different stores.

In addition to that a well known sportsman is also very popular in modeling and advertisement industry. He/she can get millions from the advertisements and modeling  and fame as well.

A famous scholar said, more success brings more responsibilities. A well know athlete recognized from everyone, specially youngster, they follow their famous player in any aspects. So popular sportsman should be more responsible because every eye watchinges him and his acts. In our daily life we can observe couple of youngster started smoking because they watched their star player doing smoking. So celebrity should be very responsible.

Furthermore we can also observer celebrity social and family life also effects. Actually being a famous sportsman is a big responsibility, one should participate in different tournaments which may be in different cities of his country or other countries. It means lot of time in traveling, also practice and event as well. So it indicates that they have very busy schedule and less time for their family and friends which harms theirs life.

As per my conclusion, celebrity having very difficult life, they have tough routine and less time and. it will effect their family and social life which is priceless.

Comments:

Overall good try. Some grammatical errors which breaks clear progress of some sentences. Apart from it, keep answer clear with more discussions… Practice like this will surely bring improvement.

 

From Waseem,

KSA,

 

4 Responses so far.

  1. Waseem says:

    On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
    Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
    describe the item you lost
    explain how you lost it
    tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

    Dear Sir/Madam,
    I am writing to claim my valuable item which I lost yesterday and it was fully insured by your company.

    A month ago I purchased wrist watch from XYZ shop on 17th May, 2016. It cost around $390 which insurance from your organization.

    Yesterday evening I went for a tea party with my friends, as usual I weared same watch on that occasion but at the end interval of party I noticed then I did not foundfind my favorite wrist watch. As I recalled my memory then I realized that at the mid interval of party I went to washroom and over there I putted down my watch. Instantly I went back to washroom but it was not there. I checked with hotel managements but they did not foundfind or recovered my valuable item.

    As it is fully covered by insurance company so I need to claim my item from your organization in form of same item or amount.

    I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

    Yours faithfully,
    Mr. ABC.

  2. Waqas says:

    Hello Sir,

    I wanted to join Aisha Bawani campus for Ielts academic preparation from this month or next. Please confirm which classes are going to be conducted by Sir. Alam & will Sir Alam cover all the topis i.e reading,listening,writing & speaking ?
    When are you starting new classes??

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