KSA June 2016 ielts essays
Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
A well known sportsman getting advantages in his daily life from his fame and also sometimes they have to face disadvantages as well. If we focus on the merits of being a famous sportsman then it could be like, they will be familiar to everywhere specially at their hometown, they will be getting respects from their fans but in the meanwhile they have to face de-merits as well like their social life and family life effect.
A famous sportsman enjoyS life which he may
he imagine in his dreams. He/she will be recognized all over. If he/she they travel or shopping at public places then people knows him very well. They will called at TV programs, they will be interviewed at different media centers. People around the country and around the world knows him, they give him lot of respects as well. As famous sportsman goes in a shopping mall then people give s him respect s, taking autographs, taking selfies and they can get special discounts as well from different stores.
In addition to that a well known sportsman is also very popular in modeling and advertisement industry. He/she can get millions from the advertisements and modeling and fame as well.
A famous scholar said, more success brings more responsibilities. A well know athlete recognized from everyone, specially youngster, they follow their famous player in any aspects. So popular sportsman should be more responsible because every eye watch
inges him and his acts. In our daily life we can observe couple of youngster started smoking because they watched their star player doing smoking. So celebrity should be very responsible.
Furthermore we can also observer celebrity social and family life also effects. Actually being a famous sportsman is a big responsibility, one should participate in different tournaments which may be in different cities of his country or other countries. It means lot of time in traveling, also practice and event as well. So it indicates that they have very busy schedule and less time for their family and friends which harms theirs life.
As per my conclusion, celebrity having very difficult life, they have tough routine and less time
and. it will effect their family and social life which is priceless.
Overall good try. Some grammatical errors which breaks clear progress of some sentences. Apart from it, keep answer clear with more discussions… Practice like this will surely bring improvement.