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KSA June 2016 ielts essays

Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?   Sample Answer: A well known sportsman getting advantages in his daily life from his fame and also sometimes they have to face disadvantages as well. […]

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Adeela essay of 7.5 from Peshawar

Adeela essay of 7.5 from Peshawar She has given exam 16 times. She thinks british council  and AEO is just making money….   Many children these days have an unhealthy life style. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this. To what extent do you agree or disagree.   Nowadays, children are leading […]

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ielts essays by my students karachi

Question and sample answer by Sir Alam students   UNPAID COMMUNITY SERVICE SHOULD BE COMPULSORY PART OF HIGH SCHOOLS PROGRAMES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?   Essay one Dear Sir Alam, ASA, Please review the below essay on “UNPAID COMMUNITY IN THE HIGH SCHOOL” ————————————————————————————————————————- The value of unpaid community has been common in the […]

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she gets 6 band with this writing

Should she go for rechecking? This essay belongs to Numra whose first language is English. She was born in England and now currently living in Lahore, she has done her Graduartion or master in English. She contacted me and claims that she wasn’t given fair bandscore for writing module. What i asked her to do […]

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essay and letter from faraz Dubai

Essay and letter from Faraz Dubai Below is a letter and essay of general training from Farz from Dubai, UAE who wishes to get minimum 7 in writing. Follow comments given to him for improvement.   Task 1: Dear Nasir, I hope this finds you and your family in the best of health. I have […]

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Sabtain’s essay and comments

The essay below is from my student who fails to get 7 bandscore in writing. Let me comment him so he knows where he lacks. QUESTION Some people prefer to spend their life doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and […]

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ielts essay correction by sir Alam

ielts essay correction by sir Alam   a Part 2 part 3  

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IELTS essay correction lesson

IELTS essay correction lesson   part 1   part 2         Part 3                    

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improve writing by TR and CC

Start working on first two criteria to improve writing   Candidates who are overall weak in writing should not too much focus on vocabulary and Grammar. They can give this time to respond to the question and plan and organize their ideas. As a result, they will score more in “TR” and “CC”. What they […]

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Improve Lexical Resource

How to work on vocabulary in Writing module   I get immense questions by candidates like how to improve vocabulary. Some demand list of words , while, find other alternatives. As response i would like to share what really can help you to get maximum in it. Obviously you can’t express your thoughts without words […]

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